326 magnetic poetry

while hanging out at City at Peace DC today, i rearranged some of the words on the freezer door to make this poem below. i have a photo of it, but my phone is acting up, so here are the words. let me know what you think, and if you have an idea for a title.

they dress her in a lie
worship size as diamond
a thousand girls go here
none stop to say no
it aches me to watch
the void
her shake
him boy
their lake
she rain
mistake
what could one think all it was
not love
the show is
a frantic rose
or red blue road
flooded with enormous
stares

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One response to “326 magnetic poetry

  1. i would name it strip

    because it makes me think of a strip bar for some reason.

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